Name | English Editing work |
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Owner | ins |
Level | 5 |
Topic | Literacy |
Unit | editing |
Description | A generic way of explicitly teaching editing skills. Can be used with any text. |
File 1 | 617_generic editing work story - good half hour activity.doc |
File 2 |
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You will have 20minutes to change this story into something more exciting.
You can:
change thewords
add bits
include moredetail
at the end of your20 minutes you will swap your work with a friend and markeachothers.
You will do 3 starsand a wishremember to point out 3 really positive things and giveone target for future work.
Make sure you writethe date and LO in your book. Your sheet must be stuck in at theend of the session.
Enjoy!
performance andshowed it to her friends family. They clapped.
Her little brotherdanced with them. They had a fun time. The
next day they showedtheir friends at school the dance. Then
they taught them howto do the dance. By lunchtime 5 girls all
knew thedance.