Name | Studying two contrasting poems |
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Owner | Tesfan |
Level | 5 |
Topic | Literacy |
Unit | Poetry |
Description | 2 week unit - 'Owl and the Pussycat' and 'Highwayman's Hollow' |
File 1 | 12_Y5 Literacy plan Autumn -contrasting poems for Brenden.doc |
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Year5Term:Autumn Week commencing: | ||||||||
Objectives: | Text(s): poetry- the Owl and the Pussycat(week 1 out of 2) | |||||||
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Guided Class 5 i | ReadingClass 5 ii |
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| Shared reading focus/text analysis: through thepoem The Owl and the Pussycat, pupils identify the content of thepoem and what is distinctive about it and why e.g. it is a nonsensepoem. Discuss some of the background to the poem e.g.it is a nonsense poem written in 1871 by Edward Lear (1812 - 1888).NB a runcible spoon is a small fork with three prongs, one having asharp edge, and curved like a spoon. | Pupils annotate own copies during shared readingto identify what is distinctive about this poem and to convey theirown reactions on the content. How is it possible to tell it waswritten a long time ago?
| Evaluate what things we think are nonsense andwhy. Discuss whether these things really are amusing or not. | See medium term planning as non-discrete CoreSubject work is shown in detail here |
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| Shared reading focus/text analysis continued:through the poem The Owl and the Pussycat, pupils analyse how thepoet uses full rhymes and half rhymes, internal rhymes and othersound patterns and to what effect. Pupils use annotated own copy ofhandout. Teacher also models her own on OHT version.
| Inpairs, pupils discuss what they like/dislike about the poem andrecord their own input into Literacy books, ready for feedbacklater
| Find words which show that the poem was writtenover 100 years agolocate definitions in dictionary |
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| Shared writing: focus is on use of correctsentence punctuation when responding to text level questions.Teacher will also model using the evidence in the poem to findanswers especially with reference to questions 1,2 & 3
| Pupils will respond to text level questions onthe poem Owl and the Pussycat (Letts p11). MApupils to identify what there is at the end of each verse. Whatdoes this tell us about the poem?
| Discuss question 5: can we find 5 things whichsuggest that this poem is a nonsense poem. How can we set this outcorrectly when answering the question? Pupils write answer in booksas modelled. |
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| Discuss the poem and agree that it has a happyending. Discuss ideas for writing another verse in similar styleand with similar structure (MA), on the theme of the hut or thehouse that the owl and the pussycat choose to live in | Pupils to work on own verse. MA pupils to try towrite verse in similar style and with similar structure. Otherpupils may attempt to write a nonsense verse based on the ideasdiscussed. | Pupils to share own nonsense verses |
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| S1- Sentence Level focus: to investigate word order by examining howfar the order of words in sentences can be changed e.g. which wordsare essential, which can be deleted, should we add anywords? | Whole class skills work: experiment withconstructing sentences in different ways e.g. The owl and thepussycat went to sea in a beautiful pea green boatoff they sailedin a boat.
| When we reorder the sentence, check there are nochanges in meaning. Have we conveyed what we want to convey in thebest way? |
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Outcome/Product: to look at and compare twocontrasting poems and know that we can appreciate them in differentways |
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Additional objectives: to continue with Drama/ En1 opportunities throughLiteracy and cross curricular work; to apply knowledge of spellingpatterns through daily Superspellers work and to check wordsusing wordbanks and dictionaries where appropriate; to be aware ofneed for neat, clear and joined handwriting | ||||||||
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Objectives: | Text(s): poetry- Highwaymans Hollow (week 2out of 2) | |||||||
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Independent / Group Work (includingdifferentiation) |
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Guided Class 5 i | ReadingClass 5 ii |
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| Shared reading focus/text analysis: through thepoem Highwaymans Hollow, pupils identify the content of the poemand discuss style. NB place it in its historical context.Highwayman's Hollow is about a highwayman who was killed by a manhe tried to hold up. In the poem he became a ghost and tried totake revenge on the man who killed him. | Pupils annotate own copies during shared readingto identify what is distinctive about this poem and to convey theirown reactions on the content
| Pupils share their ideas on content andeffectiveness | ICT opportunities willbe provided for pupils to use class computer inside theLiteracy hour where appropriatee.g. when writing takes place, some pupils will carry outtheir drafting onscreen. |
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| Shared reading focus/text analysis: look at newvocabulary and identify syllables in the poem. Discuss the impactof the echoes. MA pupils may also be able to understand the impactof the long drawn out syllables which makes the setting evenspookier. | After teacher led session, pupils in groups of 5to work out a dramatic scene based on the poem, culminating in adramatic freeze-frame climax. | Pupils to ask questions to the group at the pointof freeze-framing e.g. what is the main character really feeling atthis point? Etc. |
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| Modelling writing in teacher-led session: shortpoetry analysis of Highwaymans Hollow. Look at effectivevocabulary and how the poet has used images to convey feelings e.g.the rotting leaves. Refer to images when analysing poem to laygroundwork for tomorrows metaphors work. MA pupils may also beable to understand the personification (dark firs frown) | Pupils carry out own independent writing,focusing on poetry review as left. LA pupils may use writing frame:what makes this poem effective? What exciting vocabulary is usedand how does this make you feel? Is the ghost right to want to seekrevenge or does this make him as bad as the killer? Would yourecommend this poem and why?
| Pupils read own reviewspeers to givefeedback. |
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| Continuing with the poem Highwaymans Hollow,look at effective images and how the poet has used imagery toconvey content. Use various images to inspire us to usesimiles/metaphors e.g. the leaves are as rotten as a carcass or theleaves are a rotten carcass. | Pupils to note down own metaphors in books. MApupils will be encouraged to turn metaphors into similes
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| Sentence Level work (S5): focus is on use ofspeech marks for direct speech. Using the poem HighwaymansHollow, draw attention to the fact that the whole poem is inspeech marks. Who is speaking? (It is the ghost of the deadhighwayman). Model how to set out direct speech using some of thethings that the ghost says | Pupils to correctly set out sentences as leftusing correct direct speech demarcation. MApupils will switch between reported and direct speech and beencouraged to apply different demarcation needs.
| Common pitfalls e.g. comma before speech markends, capital at start of speech, using a new line for a newspeaker etc etc. |
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Outcome/Product: to look at and compare twocontrasting poems and know that we can appreciate them in differentways |
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Additional objectives: to continue with Drama/ En1 opportunities throughLiteracy and cross curricular work; to apply knowledge of spellingpatterns through daily Superspellers work and to check wordsusing wordbanks and dictionaries where appropriate; to be aware ofneed for neat, clear and joined handwriting | ||||||||
Forward Planning /Evaluation: | ||||||||
Key:
T =Teacher supportOA= Other Adult support S= SENCOsupport
Ability Groups:
The Owl and the Pussy-cat
The Owl and the Pussy-cat went to sea
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Pussy said to theOwl, 'You elegant fowl!
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'Dear pig, are youwilling to sell for one shilling
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Highwaymans Hollow- GilbertYonge
Where the cliff hangs hollow, where the gloomfalls chill,
You hear a something, follow, follow, followdown the hill;
Where the horses sweat and the lather and thedusk begins to gather
It is there that I will meet you and will greetyou,
You, Sir Traveller.
Where the leaves lie rotting and the nightfalls blind,
You hear a someone trotting, trotting, trottingdown the wind,
And you listen all a-shiver to my ghostly Standdeliver,
Yes, although my bones have whitened, you arefrightened
Yet, Sir Traveller.
Twas a traveller who slew me where the darkfirs frown,
Twas his small sword through me and the blooddripped down.
Where the horses sweat and lather and the duskbegins to gather,
It is there I ride behind you to remindyou,
You, Sir Traveller.
Highwaymans Hollow
Aim: to learn how to respondto a poem through writing; to be able to identify what
is distinctive aboutit.
When I read the poem it made me feel
The part which was particularly effectivewas
This is because
This is because
Overall, I think
Extension: look at the long drawn out syllablesand write down some examples. Say what you think the effect of thisis.
Highwaymans Hollow
Aim: to learn how to useevidence in a poem to respond to higher level questions (open endedand use of inference and deduction)
1. Can you describe thesetting for this poem?
2. Who is the narrator ofthe poem?
3. What time of day willthe highwayman meet the travellers? How do you know this?
4. In class we agreed thatthe tone of this poem is spooky and menacing. How does the poetcreate this impression?
5. What do we find outabout the highwayman in the middle verse? How does this make youfeel?
6. What do we finallylearn about how the highwayman died?
Challenge: the poet Gilbert Yonge uses effectiveimagery on this line:
Twas atraveller who slew me where the dark firs frown.
Can you remember what we call this?
What is the effect of this line?
The Owl & thePussycat
The poem has a happy ending.
Can you write anotherverse to follow on from the previous verse (in a similar style andwith a similar structure IF you can).
Here are some ideas for your next versestheme:
A verse about where they choose tolive
A verse about a romantic momentbetween the two of them
A verse to describe aquarrel
Or you can choose your owntheme